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From: Neal Smith <nsmith@micro.ti.com> Subject: Re: (urth) Severian's reticence Date: Wed, 17 Jun 1998 14:24:20 I think that in spite of Severian's continuing assurance that he has perfect recall, that he might as well not have it. He intentionally omits enough information in the account that it is almost as if a nearly identical character who does not have perfect recall has been substituted, and occasionally remembers and adds details at a leter time. (Perhaps Severian does not have perfect memory - but has forgotten that fact. No, just joking.) Anyway, I can see on the part of the author the need to do this to maintain suspense, and a few mysteries, but why would Severian leave these things out in general? A few of the instances probably have unique reasons: for instance, Adam's comment about Severian hiding his tryst with Thecla to avoid admitting another betrayal of his guild is dead on. In general, though, I think that it is simply a matter of style: Severian tends to include details only when they directly affected the *actions* that he saw, or took, and leaves out his emotions, what he considers trivia, and side issues, no matter how interested we readers may be in some of these other details. For example, the conversation with Dorcas that Adam mentioned: in the first part, he narrates enough to show how she left one way, he another, and enough reasons. Later, he adds the rest, when it is relevant to what he is doing at the time - being lost in his memory. Neal Smith *More Wolfe info & archive of this list at http://www.urth.net/urth/