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From: "Matthew Davis" <matthew@michaelscycles.freeserve.co.uk> Subject: (urth) "Love's Labour's Lost" in John Crowley's AEgypt Date: Mon, 17 Sep 2001 16:42:35 +0100 This is a multi-part message in MIME format. ------=_NextPart_000_0009_01C13F97.C133E5E0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="iso-8859-1" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable I know this is primarily a space for discussion of Gene Wolfe, but since = John Crowley does seem to pop up quite regularly I though it might be a = worthwhile space to test out the observations below. I don't know if = anyone else has discussed the relationship of "Love's Labour's Lost" to = John Crowley's "Aegypt" - it seems obvious to me but I haven't seen it = mentioned in any of the reviews or essays - so if all of the below is = well known then I apologise for wasting your time. On the surface, Crowley's only use of LLL is for the title of Kraft's = autobiography and to acknowledge the origins of that title. This all = occurs within the consciousness of Rosie, and the only things they evoke = for her are own depression, forlornness and sense of solitude. If you = didn't otherwise know you might think LLL is a tragedy, from such a = deliberate misreading of what is actually a comedy. Although a comedy = that is almost very nearly a problem play. I If we look at the plot, we can see a use similar to that Crowley makes = of "the Solitudes" as an organising principle: a group of = scholars/knights retreat from the world, makes vows of celibacy and = forswear love so that they may concentrate on their studies that will = bring them fame and triumph over death and time. Of course the real = world breaks in upon when they fall in love, and their experience at the = hands of the objects of their desire leaves them compromised and their = vaunted intellectualism humiliated. Sounds a little like Pierce, yes? = Most commentators point out that that the movement of the play is about = leaving off self-deceptions in a world of enclosed artificiality to = enter into wider perspective of reality. Of course, this is a = fundamental narrative pattern, and since in its philosophical form as = "gnosis" this is what "Aegypt" is all about I can't really argue that = Crowley is drawing particularly upon this. But it's certainly more = advanced than what one would expect to find in a comedy. And that it is = a comedy is important, with its connotations of spring time and the = pastoral. In his treatment of Blackbury Jambs and the Faraway Hills it = is evident that Crowley is imbuing these locations with the qualities of = Elizabethan pastoral. LLL for a pastoral comedy has an advanced quality = of knowingness, where the obvious literary artificiality of its plot and = the characters conceptions of themselves is transcended by acknowledging = genuine mortification and introducing a cyclicality into the lives of = its protagonists - the vows that lead to farce repeat themself as, if = not tragedy, then as an experience of some pain - tying its = protagonists' development into the forthcoming year with a more = complicated and emotionally resonant reality. In his final lecture, = Crowley uses Barr to make it quite explicit that he is drawing upon = Elizabethan storytelling techniques of repetition to induce meaning. Of = all Shakespeare's plays, LLL has probably the least action - it is a = comedy of contemplation in set pieces progressing by its protagonists = appearances and reappearances in different but very formal combinations. = We know from "Novelty" Crowley conceives of "Aegypt" in terms influenced = by "Euphes" (LLL is certainly a satire on Euphuism), and indeed without = its very formal elements of themes, scenes, characters and their = thoughts repeating the whole novel would be impenetrable. Finally, the last third of the play revolves around how each of the = suitors is fooled into wooing the wrong woman. The breaking of their = vows and quibbling over their consciences is made rather ridiculous when = they are fooled into making suits to the wrong women, although there is = still pathos in their predicament. Just as Pierce's debates of = conscience are still valid even though he has confused the two Roses. = And the play ends uncertain as to whether the suitors will win their = women. II Let's look at the only obvious Crowley makes of LLL. Kraft's = autobiography is titled "Sit Down, Sorrow" later in the book we are = given the actual passage in LLL from which it originates: "Welcome the sour cup of prosperity!=20 Affliction may one day smile again: and until then,=20 Sit down, sorrow." However, this is wrong. The proper quote , in its fullness, should be: "I suffer for the truth, sir: for true it is I was taken with = Jaquenetta, and Jaquenetta is a true girl; and therefore welcome the = sour cup of prosperity! Affliction may one day smile again; and till = then, sit THEE down, sorrow." - act I, sc.1, the final speech, since = line numbering varies for prose. (CAPS - my own) So: the original passage is prose and the quotation is wrong. The only = instance I can find of "Sit down, sorrow" is accompanied by the same = cod-versification, and it is here: = http://www.johndee.org/charlotte/Chapter14/14p1.html as an epigraph used = in Charlotte Fell Smith's "John Dee" (1909). The assumption we may make = is that in his researches Kraft/Crowley has taken this particular quote = from this particular biography of Dee, where this particular chapter = relates Dee's and Talbot's time in Bohemia. Of course it may be Crowley = and Smith are using the same edition of LLL, but a quick browse through = various editions and their editorial commentary in my local library = (which holds a lot of reserve stock for the RSC) didn't turn up a single = instance of this particular version. III One of the foundations of LLL criticism is that the character of = "Holofernes" represents John Florio, and since then other characters and = dialogue have been identified as various Elizabethan notables and = touching upon current events with the entire play as a satire on the = school of Walter Raleigh. In particular, the play is a locus for people = trying to connect Shakespeare to Giordano Bruno. Florio was an associate = of Bruno's when he was in England and the character of "Berowne" has = often been identified as being in some degree based upon Bruno - the = extensive use of celestial imagery, the celebration of a vivifying = divine love, the extensive use of eye and visualisation imagery that may = be derived from Bruno's art of Memory. Personally, I think this is all = extremely tenuous at best - given that Francis A. Yates wrote a study of = LLL I'm sure that she has at some point examined these connections and = come to a more definitive conclusion - but the point is not whether it = is true, accurate, or even faintly provable but that this series of = Bruno-LLL associations is sufficiently long-standing to merit = consideration and therefore have influence. How convincing any of the above is is debatable, but I thought it was = interesting how on even brief examination LLL kept touching upon = important scenes, themes and characters in "Aegypt" and vice versa. Matthew Davis ------=_NextPart_000_0009_01C13F97.C133E5E0 Content-Type: text/html; charset="iso-8859-1" Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable <!DOCTYPE HTML PUBLIC "-//W3C//DTD HTML 4.0 Transitional//EN"> <HTML><HEAD> <META http-equiv=3DContent-Type content=3D"text/html; = charset=3Diso-8859-1"> <META content=3D"MSHTML 5.50.4207.2601" name=3DGENERATOR> <STYLE></STYLE> </HEAD> <BODY bgColor=3D#ffffff> <DIV><FONT face=3DArial size=3D2><FONT size=3D2> <P>I know this is primarily a space for discussion of Gene Wolfe, but = since John=20 Crowley does seem to pop up quite regularly I though it might be a = worthwhile=20 space to test out the observations below. I don’t know if anyone = else has=20 discussed the relationship of "Love’s Labour’s Lost" to John = Crowley’s "Aegypt"=20 – it seems obvious to me but I haven’t seen it mentioned in = any of the reviews=20 or essays - so if all of the below is well known then I apologise for = wasting=20 your time.</P> <P>On the surface, Crowley’s only use of LLL is for the title of = Kraft’s=20 autobiography and to acknowledge the origins of that title. This all = occurs=20 within the consciousness of Rosie, and the only things they evoke for = her are=20 own depression, forlornness and sense of solitude. If you didn’t = otherwise know=20 you might think LLL is a tragedy, from such a deliberate misreading of = what is=20 actually a comedy. Although a comedy that is almost very nearly a = problem=20 play.</P> <P>I</P> <P>If we look at the plot, we can see a use similar to that Crowley = makes of=20 "the Solitudes" as an organising principle: a group of scholars/knights = retreat=20 from the world, makes vows of celibacy and forswear love so that they = may=20 concentrate on their studies that will bring them fame and triumph over = death=20 and time. Of course the real world breaks in upon when they fall in = love, and=20 their experience at the hands of the objects of their desire leaves them = compromised and their vaunted intellectualism humiliated. Sounds a = little like=20 Pierce, yes? Most commentators point out that that the movement of the = play is=20 about leaving off self-deceptions in a world of enclosed artificiality = to enter=20 into wider perspective of reality. Of course, this is a fundamental = narrative=20 pattern, and since in its philosophical form as "gnosis" this is what = "Aegypt"=20 is all about I can’t really argue that Crowley is drawing = particularly upon=20 this. But it’s certainly more advanced than what one would expect = to find in a=20 comedy. And that it is a comedy is important, with its connotations of = spring=20 time and the pastoral. In his treatment of Blackbury Jambs and the = Faraway Hills=20 it is evident that Crowley is imbuing these locations with the qualities = of=20 Elizabethan pastoral. LLL for a pastoral comedy has an advanced quality = of=20 knowingness, where the obvious literary artificiality of its plot and = the=20 characters conceptions of themselves is transcended by acknowledging = genuine=20 mortification and introducing a cyclicality into the lives of its = protagonists –=20 the vows that lead to farce repeat themself as, if not tragedy, then as = an=20 experience of some pain – tying its protagonists’ = development into the=20 forthcoming year with a more complicated and emotionally resonant = reality. In=20 his final lecture, Crowley uses Barr to make it quite explicit that he = is=20 drawing upon Elizabethan storytelling techniques of repetition to induce = meaning. Of all Shakespeare’s plays, LLL has probably the least = action – it is a=20 comedy of contemplation in set pieces progressing by its protagonists=20 appearances and reappearances in different but very formal combinations. = We know=20 from "Novelty" Crowley conceives of "Aegypt" in terms influenced by = "Euphes"=20 (LLL is certainly a satire on Euphuism), and indeed without its very = formal=20 elements of themes, scenes, characters and their thoughts repeating the = whole=20 novel would be impenetrable.</P> <P>Finally, the last third of the play revolves around how each of the = suitors=20 is fooled into wooing the wrong woman. The breaking of their vows and = quibbling=20 over their consciences is made rather ridiculous when they are fooled = into=20 making suits to the wrong women, although there is still pathos in their = predicament. Just as Pierce’s debates of conscience are still = valid even though=20 he has confused the two Roses. And the play ends uncertain as to whether = the=20 suitors will win their women.</P> <P>II</P> <P>Let’s look at the only obvious Crowley makes of LLL. = Kraft’s autobiography is=20 titled "Sit Down, Sorrow" later in the book we are given the actual = passage in=20 LLL from which it originates:</P> <P>"Welcome the sour cup of prosperity! <BR>Affliction may one day smile = again:=20 and until then, <BR>Sit down, sorrow."</P> <P>However, this is wrong. The proper quote , in its fullness, should = be:</P> <P>"I suffer for the truth, sir: for true it is I was taken with = Jaquenetta, and=20 Jaquenetta is a true girl; and therefore welcome the sour cup of = prosperity!=20 Affliction may one day smile again; and till then, sit THEE down, = sorrow." – act=20 I, sc.1, the final speech, since line numbering varies for prose. (CAPS = – my=20 own)</P> <P>So: the original passage is prose and the quotation is wrong. The = only=20 instance I can find of "Sit down, sorrow" is accompanied by the same=20 cod-versification, and it is here: </FONT><A=20 href=3D"http://www.johndee.org/charlotte/Chapter14/14p1.html"><FONT=20 size=3D2>http://www.johndee.org/charlotte/Chapter14/14p1.html</FONT></A><= FONT=20 size=3D2> as an epigraph used in Charlotte Fell Smith’s "John Dee" = (1909). The=20 assumption we may make is that in his researches Kraft/Crowley has taken = this=20 particular quote from this particular biography of Dee, where this = particular=20 chapter relates Dee’s and Talbot’s time in Bohemia. Of = course it may be Crowley=20 and Smith are using the same edition of LLL, but a quick browse through = various=20 editions and their editorial commentary in my local library (which holds = a lot=20 of reserve stock for the RSC) didn’t turn up a single instance of = this=20 particular version.</P> <P>III</P> <P>One of the foundations of LLL criticism is that the character of = "Holofernes"=20 represents John Florio, and since then other characters and dialogue = have been=20 identified as various Elizabethan notables and touching upon current = events with=20 the entire play as a satire on the school of Walter Raleigh. In = particular, the=20 play is a locus for people trying to connect Shakespeare to Giordano = Bruno.=20 Florio was an associate of Bruno’s when he was in England and the = character of=20 "Berowne" has often been identified as being in some degree based upon = Bruno –=20 the extensive use of celestial imagery, the celebration of a vivifying = divine=20 love, the extensive use of eye and visualisation imagery that may be = derived=20 from Bruno’s art of Memory. Personally, I think this is all = extremely tenuous at=20 best - given that Francis A. Yates wrote a study of LLL I’m sure = that she has at=20 some point examined these connections and come to a more definitive = conclusion –=20 but the point is not whether it is true, accurate, or even faintly = provable but=20 that this series of Bruno-LLL associations is sufficiently long-standing = to=20 merit consideration and therefore have influence.</P> <P>How convincing any of the above is is debatable, but I thought it was = interesting how on even brief examination LLL kept touching upon = important=20 scenes, themes and characters in "Aegypt" and vice versa.</P> <P>Matthew Davis</P></FONT></FONT></DIV></BODY></HTML> ------=_NextPart_000_0009_01C13F97.C133E5E0-- *More Wolfe info & archive of this list at http://www.urth.net/urth/